WALT describe our scene for our narrative

                            The chilly beach

The sun was reflecting onto the deep blue crystal clear water. The massive clouds were floating in the gigantic blue sky while the seawater was slapping the rocks. It seemed like the tide was coming in. I could smell the salty sea and feel the sloppy squishy sand on the chilly beach. I felt cold and the shiver went down my spine. Far away I could hear another huge waves making it’s way towards the shore.

Exemplar 1

WALT understand how to write a good scene for our narrative

pania

WAL to know our charters after our                  first reading

Pania was a brave and confident girl because she said she was not scared of heights and she was not scared to jump off the west tower.

Matui is someone that is scared of heights and that does not want to jump off the west tower and that is not confident and his stomach felt jelly on the where to the top .

Uncle hone was kind of person that encourage them to jump off the west tower.

Ha'amonga

Ratios and proportions

Ratio