Narrative

Wow look at that big volcano we were at rangitoto. The volcano was still dormant. We will camp over well it’s dormant. Come on we have to continue our adventure. Come guys we have to go find fresh water and food to drink and eat . I “said “to “him “okay all of us have backpacks with nothing in it except for empty water bottles. Some of us had to split up to look for food. Some of got lost so we shouted for the others then the others shouted back. Another four hours later after we drank the ground shook and it was a big shook. The volcano started erupting after a few hours because it got active. Ash was up in the sky,all of the water got poisoned.

After a while some of us found food and some didn't we put a fire for the food to get cooked so we can eat. Four hour later we started looking for water to drink it was 7am in the morning we searched and we searched until we finally found an fresh river. After that we put it in our empty water bottle we drank lots of water because we were very thirsty.

5 w's
What erupting volcano poisoned water.
Where Rangitoto island.
Why because it got active.
Who others.
When After a few hours

Wesley, I like that you have bolded your words.by Dane.

Teenage girl

                                               Teenage Girl

WALT write a introduction

One day there was a teenage Taahine (girl) hanging out in the forest with her four friends, until they got hungry.

So they went back an got (ice cream) until someone jumped  out and blamed her on something she did not do.

Beautiful young girl with brown hair wearing little pink dress and ...

Spiderman

WALT write an introduction

Once under the street in the drains there's a Spiderman living.

His back story is that he had an old friend that disagreed with him.

Marvel's Spider-Man Game | PS4 - PlayStation

Santa claus

Bharat Darshan Train : IRCTC introduces Bharat Darshan trains for ...

WALT:Write A descriptive orientation.

Where: At the train station.

Who:The character is Santa Claus.

When: It was on Friday afternoon.

What: He Finds a portal to another world.

Why: Because he wanted to find out what is at the other side of the portal.

One Christmas Night Santa Claus was out delivering presents to other countries in the world. While he was out giving out presents his big  red slay that can fit more than 1000 presents ran out of magic so it fell down. But luckily there was a train station close by. He went inside the train. The train was moving fast then it transported him into another world out of New Zealand.

Trees for Survival

Trees are important because they give us oxygen,food and also help to stop global warming. We need to grow more trees because we only have 23.8% trees covering Auckland. But some lumberjacks always cut down the trees. But if you cut down trees then that means that you do not know what oxygen is. But we need to cut trees because there are lots of people that are homeless in Auckland. We  need to build schools and lots of shopping centers. But at the same time we are destroying animal habitats.

The statistics show that 23.8% of the land is covered with forests. So that means that we do not need to worry about the environment and grow more trees to survive in future.

Recount Assessment

Today we tested 2  dark chocolate Mrs sharma was the one that brag the dark chocolate. Mrs sharma called lydia  to come and video us smaling the chocolate and eating the dark chocolate. But there were labels on one of the chocolate. We learnt that labels can  be  propaganda propaganda means telling people that it is the best chocolate in the world and forcing people to buy it so they can get  more money for their   boss. And there was one that had only 99% of coco. Tested yucky because there was not that much of sugar we tested the one with labels and it had 48.5 sugar in it we tested and it was yum because it had lots of sugar.

Feedback from the teacher

Recount T1W6

Recount

Whale hunters

One day there were more than 300 whales that were looking for paradise in the deep blue sea. They were diving  across to find Paradise. They were very Humongous  whales that were in the deep blue sea. They were also trying to hunt down some meat for them to eat. One day there were savages that came and  tried to kill them. The whales swirled in circles t so their boats could sink into the deep blue sea. The whale hunters got killed and now the deep blue sea Now the whales can live in peace.

This is my recount about the Japanese killing whales in the sea.

IALT THINK FROM SOMEBODY ELSE'S POINT OF VIEW

I leant what to do when there is a earthquake you have to get under a table

celebrating family

we were taking about how do we celebrate our family one of them were  helping each other and a another one was family.

my upinyin about theme parks

I would never go on a roller coaster after listening to the instant that happened in America in Queensland in dreamworld. Because I heard that 4 altrs died in dreamworld and 2 children managed to Escape From the instant that’s why I would never go to the roller coaster ever again.

the tests

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the lost bried

one day it was a glorious morning. With a girl that was getting married the girl dilts ten want to get married because she was aimlessly. Then she Run in to a foist. She didn't no where she was going.she was lost She left footprints  then the haspin saw the footprints then the haspin followed the footprints then he found the girl then they married.

the moster

the brezee

Today we had to write about a short clip we watched. Our goal was to describe IN DETAIL what we saw. This was just a practice so then when we wrote our own stories, we know how to write in detail and don't forget to leave things out. It helps the reader get a picture in their head, like a movie, of what I am writing.

This is the clip we used.
(Only the first 1 minute - about the boy sleeping through his alarms)



This is what I wrote.

the jetlee breeze  blow the thought the open window the suns shanie  bright light went thought the window under the window there was a reelow resting there was a pack of books. on the reelow  it showed 7:00 as it ticked to 7:00 the reelow pled a slow song but salley the slow song turd off from a sleepy boy.he went back to sleep the skin alam went he was rlakedin to turd  it off the he turd it off then went back to his  scipy pilow

Do you think I have described what happened in lots of detail?
Please leave me a comment to let me know if I did achieve my goal or not.

all about pafe

wesley''go take pafe for a walk I took him to the zoo but pafe din'tent want to go there because there were lots of animals that would give him a frt they had shape jose like a crocodile  and shape clos and it made pafe run to the bush .then he hid a nose it was a nose going like this ror ror it was a nose of a lion pafe was frighten the lion  tried to eat him but  he couldn't because he was trapped then pafe went back to wesley and they both went home.

the bush

i Learnt how to make diskimage words with sounds

my house

I Leant to clien my room

my house

I Leant how to take about my house