Tuesday, September 20, 2016
the lost bried
one day it was a glorious morning. With a girl that was getting married the girl dilts ten want to get married because she was aimlessly. Then she Run in to a foist. She didn't no where she was going.she was lost She left footprints then the haspin saw the footprints then the haspin followed the footprints then he found the girl then they married.
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I like your solution, very clear. It shows you really thought about the situation. You are absolutely right! If the bride was running into the muddy forrest she would of left footprints in the mud, and the husband would have been able to find her. Great thinking!
ReplyDeleteNext steps - Adding detail. you have just said 'the girl was getting married'. Who was the girl? What did she look like? What was she wearing? Where was she getting married? Who was she marrying? Did she love him?
Give more detail to your characters and setting before you move onto your problem and solution.