Narrative

Wow look at that big volcano we were at rangitoto. The volcano was still dormant. We will camp over well it’s dormant. Come on we have to continue our adventure. Come guys we have to go find fresh water and food to drink and eat . I “said “to “him “okay all of us have backpacks with nothing in it except for empty water bottles. Some of us had to split up to look for food. Some of got lost so we shouted for the others then the others shouted back. Another four hours later after we drank the ground shook and it was a big shook. The volcano started erupting after a few hours because it got active. Ash was up in the sky,all of the water got poisoned.

After a while some of us found food and some didn't we put a fire for the food to get cooked so we can eat. Four hour later we started looking for water to drink it was 7am in the morning we searched and we searched until we finally found an fresh river. After that we put it in our empty water bottle we drank lots of water because we were very thirsty.

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What erupting volcano poisoned water.
Where Rangitoto island.
Why because it got active.
Who others.
When After a few hours

Wesley, I like that you have bolded your words.by Dane.