Tuesday, September 20, 2016

the lost bried

one day it was a glorious morning. With a girl that was getting married the girl dilts ten want to get married because she was aimlessly. Then she Run in to a foist. She didn't no where she was going.she was lost She left footprints  then the haspin saw the footprints then the haspin followed the footprints then he found the girl then they married.

Monday, September 19, 2016

Sunday, September 18, 2016

speed skills

Today we are practising learning our basic facts. We are using the game speed skills to do this. This game is about knowing your basic facts and beating your own score from before. It is not about beating other people. It is about beating yourself. Learning my basic facts and timetables will help me move up levels in maths. 

Sunday, September 11, 2016

the brezee

Today we had to write about a short clip we watched. Our goal was to describe IN DETAIL what we saw. This was just a practice so then when we wrote our own stories, we know how to write in detail and don't forget to leave things out. It helps the reader get a picture in their head, like a movie, of what I am writing.

This is the clip we used.
(Only the first 1 minute - about the boy sleeping through his alarms)

This is what I wrote.

the jetlee breeze  blow the thought the open window the suns shanie  bright light went thought the window under the window there was a reelow resting there was a pack of books. on the reelow  it showed 7:00 as it ticked to 7:00 the reelow pled a slow song but salley the slow song turd off from a sleepy boy.he went back to sleep the skin alam went he was rlakedin to turd  it off the he turd it off then went back to his  scipy pilow

Do you think I have described what happened in lots of detail?
Please leave me a comment to let me know if I did achieve my goal or not.

Wednesday, September 7, 2016

all about pafe

wesley''go take pafe for a walk I took him to the zoo but pafe din'tent want to go there because there were lots of animals that would give him a frt they had shape jose like a crocodile  and shape clos and it made pafe run to the bush .then he hid a nose it was a nose going like this ror ror it was a nose of a lion pafe was frighten the lion  tried to eat him but  he couldn't because he was trapped then pafe went back to wesley and they both went home.

Tuesday, September 6, 2016

the bush

i Learnt how to make diskimage words with sounds

Sunday, September 4, 2016


I couldilent  go swimming because my thega was bracken and thats why I coluld go s